Living on a shoestring

My brainstorm

Nesian Fusion

Introduction

The Nesian Fusion performed at Pt England School in the hall at assembly. It was on Friday 18th Sept 2015 they were dressed with makeup on. They were practicing their performance for Saturday.

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What I liked about the music was it was a beat box which is Beau Monga  and what I liked about Nyssa’s music was it was a Samoan version and it was a english version too. Their Sharp moves with the Ailao, One Pacific  T-Shirts and some cool dancers.

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They spun the Ailao so fast at the end of the music. (No to Fear) I was really inspired I wished I was in that group because I have always wanted to spin an Ailoa.

Conclusion

I thought it was awesome and the dancers are talented. They are very talented with the Ailao.

About Cross Country

Introduction

On a muddy Monday all the families, parents, teachers and the whole school were at a muddy cross country on the PES Reserve.

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In our magnificent class we got changed, next we left our class before we left we went toilet after that we went to the hard courts. When we got on the courts we sat waiting for our turn. When it was our turn Mrs Nua came and took us on the line then we got ready for a race.

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When Mrs Nua took us we had to stand in line for the race, then Mr Burt said ready set go and he used the wooden clappers. Then we started running around the muddy field and we went out of the gate to the PES reserve all the way in front of the park and all the way back to school I was so exhausted but I saw the finished line so I ran as fast as I could.

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I came past the finish line but then I came 11th or 10th anyway .I was still proud of myself. I am in Tainui which is blue.

My Brain Storm

Here are my ideas for my recount story.

A drawing from Simon

My buddy Simon listened very carefully and drew a picture of Kynan he was so shy but he never gave up.

Dictogloss Trade and Enterprise.

Trade

Trade means when you swap something for something else. You could swap a doll for money, something for a service, money for a service etc. You got the idea. Trade is an exchange of things.

Enterprise

Enterprising is when your starting a new bussiness. When you are making something to sell. First you need a plan, then you figure out what you need and make it. Then you can trade it.

Custom Stationary group.

I am in the Custom Stationary group at school. We are being enterprising because We are making bookmarks to sell. They look cool because they have a pitucture of you on it you can have anything on it.

Kynan's Positive and Negative Adventures

We are learning how to find specific evidence in the text. We are reading about Kynan he is our lead character.