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Memory and Kerstein's Athletics Recount

Paragraph 1: I was with all the year 5 girls and with Miss Garden she was our leader. My team was called Tainui now it is called Hine Moana I think that is a better name than Tainui.

Paragraph 2: The first sport we did was shot put their were two events the first event was if we wanted to win some points for our team, the second event was if we wanted just to have fun. If we are in the practising and we are good at it we need to go to the other team. That was my favourite sport.

Paragraph 3: The sports that I participate in was high jump, shot put, discus and javelin plus my favourite sport was high jump. The thing I loved about it was because I love jumping and the thing that was really hard was doing the scissor kick It was pretty hard but at least I tried my best.

Paragraph 4: Athletics is important to me because we could work as a team and also you could find new friends as well.I love sports it is the best it makes me feel good about myself.

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