Dictogloss

Countries that host the Olympics must show they have capacity space to hold the games and invest their own money into them. Through the influx of tourists the hosting country hope to gain more money during the Olympics. Ultimately the IOC decide which country gets to host them.

In 2012, the Olympics were held in London, United Kingdom. It was the third time London had hosted the games, the Olympics were hold there in 1908 and 1948. One of the upset games was in shot put, Valerie Adams claimed the gold medal only after it was found that her Belorussian opponent had tested positive for drugs.  

My mark out of 10 is 8 because I forgot the punctuation.

Dictogloss

WALT: Listen and remember to what we hear 
Punctuate our paragraph.


Last night mum made us spaghetti for dinner, "Mmm yum. mum make the best meatballs in the world!" my sister remarked. I ate lots of spaghetti. "HAHAHA!" I laughed as my brother spilt sauce all over his white shirt. "You've got sauce all over your face too" ,my sister added, I love when mum makes spaghetti.

My score was 9 out of 10

Movies

WALT: identify where speech marks go in our writing

Philip asked mum " Are we going to the movies today ". It was the holidays after all? "First you need to tidy your room and help put the dishes away and the we can go" replied mum. Philip worked like crazy getting his room clean and helped with the dishes, " This is going to be the best day ever!" exclaimed Philip. He was bursting with excitement.

10 out of 10

Personification Dictogloss

I will give this a 10 out of 10     

The moon danced upon the ocean as if on a spotlighted stage. The tired old shoe felt lonesome at the back of the closet. The cellphone alarm screamed and hollowed at me until I finally rolled out of bed.

DIctogloss

This Term our topic is called as I see it. Our team is focusing on comic art, Comics are pictures in small boxes that tell a story in sequential order. Sometimes their are words dialogue and onomatopoeia. Other times there are no words just pictures.

Dictogloss W7 ( The Kurtz Treasure )

                                                 The Kurtz Treasure

Captain Morgan Adams was a tyrant, a pirate bent on causing mayhem havoc across seven seas, but also an enemy of the British empire. Along with his crew they had ordered smaller ships and taking their booty for keeping. This all change when there came across the kurtz treasure of Davy Jones Locker.

Dictogloss ( Zack the dragon )

    Zack the Dragon

Zack was ecstatic but also curious. What was a knight and shining armor doing out in the middle of the forest? Let alone wanting to play with dragons. Didn't he know they were meant to be enemies after all. Surely he was up to something and it was up to Zack to find out this night outereamotive.

My Score out of 15 is : 14

Dictogloss

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

WILF: I can write down the sounds in words I hear and I can punctuate my writing  

The Missing Family

Something strange was happening. One by one, things started disappearing. First my mum, then my dad and now my sister were all gone. It was my job to investigate the sudden disappearance and to find a solution. 

My score out of 10 is: 10

Dictogloss

How Could you forget the food

Max could see from a distance a family that were at each other's throats. The father yelling “how could you forget the food”? To which the Mother replied,“It was an honest mistake, I'm sure someone will help us".

My score out of 14 is: 14

Dictogloss Trade and Enterprise.

Trade

Trade means when you swap something for something else. You could swap a doll for money, something for a service, money for a service etc. You got the idea. Trade is an exchange of things.

Enterprise

Enterprising is when your starting a new bussiness. When you are making something to sell. First you need a plan, then you figure out what you need and make it. Then you can trade it.

Custom Stationary group.

I am in the Custom Stationary group at school. We are being enterprising because We are making bookmarks to sell. They look cool because they have a pitucture of you on it you can have anything on it.