Basketball Court
Shooting hoops all around
Not getting shots gave me a frown
When i saw some pro’s
I gave it one more go
Bouncing the ball
As I gave it my all
Always having fun
With people all around
Seeing smiles on faces
In certain Places
Talofa Lava Kerstein, I am really impressed how you set out your poem. My favourite saying in your poem “Shooting hoops all around, not getting shot gave me a frown”. I like that saying because, I can really relate to you, I am also not good at shooter. By reading your poem it sounds like you really enjoy sports. Keep it going Kerstein, Malo Aupito.
ReplyDeleteTalofa Kerstein, when I read your poem I knew that I could relate to everything you said. By reading your poem I could tell that you are very into sports, and that you have been more into sports that include shooting.
ReplyDeleteMalo E Lelei Kerstein,
ReplyDeleteI really liked reading your poem. I could tell that you had a hard time trying to get the ball into the hoop. I feel that you put a lot of hard work into this and that you have tried your best to express the way you felt. Hope to see more amazing Poems/Writing like this. Keep up the great work!!
From Ana.